Watercolors- Landscapes from Class, mid-March versus early April

We've done a number of landscapes in class over the last month.  I tried them all.  This was a loose and fun process, and right up my alley.  I'll post the pics of the other painting later.

Here's the original of the first landscape-



Here's my first attempt, done about 2 weeks ago-



And the second attempt I made today, after quite a lot of regular painting.  I'm much happier with the clouds in this one.  It's not perfect, but the control of value seems better.  I gave the roof lines of the house a shot as well this time, on the right, as well as the "god light" coming from the clouds.  There's definitely stuff I'd like to try again....-